Wednesday, 11 September 2013
Extended Project | first draft + feedback
I read through and cut up the whole thing, then I begun to tidy the beginning as I waited for my mentor’s feedback. When I received it I was a bit nervous but the feedback is brilliant, there’s a lot to improve but now I have a direction & some new ideas. Some of the novella was even good!
So I’m on to the second draft, a little nervous about refining but I really want to impress with the transformation and hopefully get it done by the next deadline.
+ I’ve now done everything on my ‘preparation’ list. I’m currently reading & being incredibly charmed by The Hobbit and I went for a walk in the forest late last month.
The writing trip went well, I didn’t write much but I got something better, a renewed sense of being in a forest, which will be useful whilst I’m editing.